OLD FOOL

Copyright ©2017 by Creole Gaudet. All rights reserved
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Stories based on my life experiences and from my imagination of love, relationships, betrayal, and vengeance that you will no doubt enjoy.


“Hey, Darren, this is Smitty, man.” Speaking into his cell phone, Smitty continued. “I have a situation and I need your advice. Can you come by my place?”

“Must be serious, you calling me Darren. I’m on my way, bro. Just give me a few. I’m about to pull into this drive-through and get me something to eat right quick.”

“Save your money, I got a whole pizza over here. The delivery guy just left.”

“That’s what’s up. I’m not too far. I’ll be there in a flash.”

Smitty set the phone onto the coffee table. He eased into the couch, tossing his head back, relaxing momentarily. Minutes later, he was awakened by Darren’s familiar knock. He rose, making his way to the front door. “Coming!” He popped it open and headed back to the den.

Darren entered. “What’s up, Smitaaa?! What’s going on?!”

“Ah, man. I don’t even know where to… The pizza is in the kitchen.”

“Got it.” Darren opened the lid. He held his palm over the top. “This looks good. Whatcha got in the fridge?”

“Miller Lite.”

“You da man!” Darren removed a plate from the cupboard, tossed a couple of slices of the thick-crust pie onto it before shoving it into the microwave. “So what’s up, bruh? Are you okay? Talk to me.”

“I had a fight.”

“What? A fight? You? With who?” Darren pulled the cold can from the tab and placed it onto the countertop. “Somebody I know?”

“No, his name is Nick. He’s Iris’s ex-boyfriend.”

“Iris… Is that that young girl who don’t know shit about auto parts that you hired on at the store anyway?” Darren watched the plate as it slowly spun on the turntable.

“Yeah.”

“Aw, damn. That can’t be good, Smitty.” The timer beeped. Darren removed his meal, grabbed the brew, and quickly entered, but was stopped in his tracks. “Shit! You look like you got hit by a train! That’s more than a situation!” He studied Smitty’s blackened eye, his swollen lip, and the cut over his brow. “You got the business!”

“Is it that bad?” Smitty grimaced as he squeezed the tube of Ambesol, laying a bead into his lower gum. He looked to Darren through his watered eyes.

“You look like a damn cartoon.”

“Fuck you, man.” Darren took a seat in the easy chair as the two broke into laughter.

“You got your ass whupped. Nick must be one of them youngsters, huh?”

“Yeah, but I ain’t scared of none of ’em.”

“Smitty, we too old to be dealing with those dudes. They doing that MMA shit now. You ’bout as in good of shape as that old pickup truck of yours out there in the driveway. Is that thing running yet? Did you get your new motor?”

“I’m still saving.”

“So, how do you get into a fight? Break that shit down for me.”

“Well, we were going to get something to drink after work and go by her place to watch some Netflix. You know, make a date of it. She was going to pay for everything, but she had to stop right quick and pick up some money that Nick owed her.”

“Nick, who kicked your ass?”

“Yeah.”

“So, why were you going to her place? He knows where she lives, doesn’t he? Why not bring her over here?”

“I was going to spend the night, and she was going to ride me home in the morning. Besides, he don’t live there anymore. She put him out last week.”

“He used to live with her?”

“She put him out, though.”

“Let me ask you something. Does she always pay for everything?”

“No, you know me. I’m a gentleman. I’m old school, D. I pay her cell phone bill. I give her gas money to get to work. I buy her lunch, and one time I even paid her rent…”

“Wait, they were living together and you paid her rent?”

“He messed up the money, and she was going to get kicked out. I wasn’t going to let her be on the streets.”

“Yet, you’re supposed to be putting money on the side to get your hot rod back together. You’re not old school, Smitty. You’re an old fool.”

“It’s not even like that.”

“How is it? How long has this been going on between you two?”

“About three months, right after I hired her. We both knew right away we had something real.”

“And I’m sure that during this entire time, she told you all about Nick, right?”

“Yeah, she really needed someone to talk to, and I was there for her no matter what time it was. I always answered my phone.”

“Who flirted first?”

“She did. She came on to me. After we would close, I would train her for management. She tongue-kissed me one night, and another time she took my dick out and licked on the head. But then my district manager called, and by the time I got off the phone with him, the mood was gone.”

“That’s what she told you?”

“Yeah, plus she felt bad about it because of Nick. They were still together then. But I knew she was just about done with him because a couple weeks ago, I was behind her and had her pants down. She fine too, D. That booty is so round and soft. I had my dick all between those cheeks.”

“Did you hit?”

“She didn’t want it to be like that. She wanted it to be special. That’s why we waited for the right time.”

“And the day you got into it with Nick was the right time. Okay…you want my advice, right?”

“Yeah, I want to know what I should do. I like her and want to be with her…”

“Stop… I need you to tell me everything that happened that day from the time you two took off on your date. Don’t leave anything out, no matter how embarrassing you think it might be. In the meantime, I’m going to enjoy this pizza. Now go.”

“Alright.” Smitty added a dab more of the painkiller and began. “We were in her car on the way to the liquor store when she picked up her phone. I didn’t know who she was calling.”

“It was Nick?”

“Yeah, she told him that she was on her way and that he had better have her shit. Then she hung up on him.

“I asked her how much it was. She said that it was fifty dollars and that she was going to use that to get us a bottle.

“I told her I would put up the fifty and buy it myself, but she insisted. She said that she was tired of him trying to play her and that she didn’t want my money; she wanted it to come from him. I asked where we were going, and she said to the pool hall right around the corner from her apartment. She said that that was one of the main problems they had. He never wanted to work and was always losing money shooting nine-ball. Next thing I know we were pulling into the lot.

“She got out and damn near ran into the joint. Then they both come out, and he was handling her.”

“Nick?”

“Yeah, he kept shoving her. Then she turned and smacked him across the head. She got him good. That’s when he grabbed her by the neck, choking her, and walked her to the front of the car. Then he slammed her to the ground.”

“What did you do?”

“I got out. You know I don’t like to see a man treating a woman like that. I stepped to him and told him to keep his hands off of her and that he should have some respect because she’s defenseless.”

“Where was Iris now?”

“She had gotten up and was brushing the dirt off.”

“Then what happened?”

“This punk told me some shit like, he didn’t know who I was, but I should get back in the car and mind my own business. He couldn’t have been no more than twenty-six or something like that. He had no respect for my gray hair, D.”

“Or that like me, you’re fifty-three, balding, fat, and of no threat to him, but go on.”

“I got in his face and told him that this was my business and I wanted to see if he would choke me. Iris even checked his ass. She dared him to slam me, a real man.

“Then he asked her why she was bringing this old ass motherfucker around here that he didn’t have a beef with.”

“That was when you should have walked away, Smitty. He was giving you your out.”

“But he looked me up and down and said that all she was going to do was get my ancient ass kicked. I wasn’t going to let him disrespect me like that.”

“And that struck a nerve?”

“Damn right. I swung on his ass. I round-housed him.”

“No, Smitty. You didn’t…”

“Hell yeah, that pissed me off.”

“Did he fall?”

“No… I missed.”

“How? She didn’t miss when she hit him across the head.”

“I don’t know. It’s like he saw it coming in slow-motion. He ducked and came up under my chin. Then he yelled at me to stay down, but I got right back up. That’s when he hit me in the gut.”

“Did he get you good?”

“I dropped to my knees, D. I couldn’t help it. My damn legs just quit on me. I got a little dizzy too. I grabbed at his ankles, felt like tree stumps; solid. I was trying to shoot his cuffs to take him down, but that’s when I felt my food coming up my esophagus. It filled my mouth. I threw up on his pant legs and his brand new Nikes. They were nice, white.”

“Aw damn, man! I know he was pissed! You fucked up his shoes?!”

“Yeah, he got really mad. He grabbed me by my collar and lifted me up. That young boy was strooong, D. I couldn’t do nothing with him. I saw him draw back with his other hand, but I didn’t see nothing but a bright light after that. It was brighter than the sun.

“Next thing I knew, Iris was helping me to the car and we were driving away.” Darren struggled, holding back a grin. “She gave me some napkins to hold to my eye. I put pressure on it to stop the bleeding.”

“Did she say anything?”

“She told me that she thought that I would have had a better fight game.”

“So, she gets you into this shit and… Never mind. What happened after that?”

“We went to her apartment, and I sat on the sofa while she got me some ice. She put it in a towel for me, and I held it to my face.

“That’s when her phone rang and she went into the bedroom. She locked the door, but I walked over and listened. She was arguing with Nick again. She was telling him like it was too.

“But then she started whispering. I knew he was getting in her head again. That’s what he’s good at. She was telling him that she never had sex with me and shit like that. I think I heard her say something like she wasn’t going to or something. I’m not sure.

“Then she got all quiet, and I heard her coming, so I ran back to the sofa and sat down. She asked me if I was listening to her conversation, and I said no. Then I told her that I was ready to watch the movie, but now she didn’t even want to. Like I said, he gets in her head.”

“So, I guess it was time for you to leave, huh?”

“Yeah, how did you know?”

“Go ‘head, finish.”

“Well, she told me that he was on his way and that I had to go. I was like, I’m ready to watch the damn movie and hang out like we planned to. I even told her that we could do something else if she wants, or just chill. I mean, I understood she was upset. I was, too.

“But she said that they needed to talk. I’m like, what is that supposed to even mean? Then she’s like, they’ve been together for almost eight years, and that nothing was going to happen between us because she loves him.

“You believe that? She already broke up with him, and now she’s talking about she loves him; the same dude that’s messing all over her. I told her that she deserves better than that and that she needs somebody who’s going to treat her like a lady, with respect. A good man, not some loser.

“Then she says that he’s her man. I asked her how was she going to do this to me. I told her that I was there when she needed someone to talk to. It was me who got her moved up to management and got her a pay raise. I did that! I was so mad, bro!”

“I know you were.”

“Then, after I point out all that, she tells me that I was a good friend and that she appreciated what I did for her.

“I told her that if she was so appreciative, she needs to tell him it’s over for good and that she’s with me now. She said that she couldn’t do that. I told her that that was some bullshit. Then she opened the door on me, D. She said I had to leave now and that she didn’t want me there when Nick got home because it would be disrespectful, and she didn’t want us to get into it. Isn’t that some shit?! I said, ‘Look at my damn eye, Iris! We already got into it! Look at my face!’ She said to not forget about my lip because it looked pretty bad too.”

“Now that’s fucked up.”

“Yeah, she was smiling. She thought it was funny. I asked her why she was laughing, and she said that I was making her laugh. Nothing was funny to me, D. She apologized, but I wasn’t even trying to hear that shit. I asked her how was I supposed to get home. She tells me to get an Uber. I couldn’t. I lost my damn phone somewhere in that parking lot where I was fighting.”

“How did you get home?”

“I walked. I went to the corner and waited for a bus, and I never saw one. It was getting dark so…”

“That’s messed up, Smitty.” Darren watched as Smitty stared into nothing. “Well, you called me over to get my advice.” Smitty picked up the Ambesol, then dropped it back onto the table. “Do you still want it?”

“Yeah, D.”

“You’re probably not going to like what I have to say, but I’m going to give it to you anyway.” Darren continued. “You went out on a date with her, thinking you were going to have her, but instead you got your ass kicked by that stud of hers. All that excitement turned her on, and the spoils went to the victor, and we know that ain’t you. While you were walking home with your face rearranged, they were doing what you wanted to be doing.”

“You don’t understand, D. I’m serious. You don’t know. It’s Nick and his mind games. He’s got her brainwashed. She’s a good girl. When we’re together, we’re great. I’m telling you. If I can keep him away from her, we’d be…”

“Are you even listening to me? You never had her. Her heart is with him; plain and simple. She’s not leaving that boy.”

“You don’t think so?”

“No. It doesn’t matter what he does, she’s not going anywhere.”

“Well, why would she come on to me like that and talk on the phone with me all night? That was real.”

“No, bro. You got played from the start. She tempted you and teased you because your nose was wide open. She used you to get everything she could get. She worked you for months, only giving you a little taste here and a little taste there. In the meantime, she got you to spend all your money on her. Money that she was giving him to lose in the pool hall. You were financing both of them, and you still didn’t get the ass.”

“Damn! It’s fucked up when you put it that way. Fuck! I’m really pissed off now. I want to kill that… I can’t let her get away without… How do I get her back?”

“Hold on, bro. You can’t go and do something crazy. It’s all part of the game. Take your loss and move on. Let her go and learn from it. Just don’t make the same mistake again. She may need you one day, and then you get to blow her off. That will hurt her more than whatever you’re thinking about right now. You’re a gentleman, right? You said so yourself. Don’t mess up your life trying to get back at her.”

Smitty slowly looked to Darren. “No, I don’t want to get back at her. I love her. I want to know how to get her back…with me.”

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LIBERTINE DREAMS – MERCEDES

Copyright ©2026 by Creole Gaudet. All rights reserved.

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I’d met Mercedes at Gold Town Cabaret, a high-end gentleman’s club in Dallas.

I hadn’t been in a while, and I’d stopped by to visit a buddy of mine who was the daytime manager.

As we caught up on old times, I noticed her watching me from across the main floor. As soon as our eyes met, without hesitation, she came over and introduced herself.

She was very pretty and had an awesome body, but right away, it became obvious that she needed to be the center of attention.

As she began telling me her life story and about her guy, who was now locked up, and how every guy that she had fallen in love with always ended up in prison, she’d taken my hands and placed them on her ass cheeks. After requesting a deep fingered massage, she continued on how he wasn’t going to be released for another year or so, but that was too soon for me.

A prison boyfriend expecting his girl to be there when he comes home is bad news when and if he finds out she’s been fucking around and hasn’t been loyal, especially when he’s had a short time in.

She also told me about her good friend, who was in his mid-seventies, and how he was always there for her when she needed him.

To me, he sounded like the typical, lonely, old man trick that was hopelessly in love with a stripper. These types are always there to bail them out of whatever trouble they’re in, just to have them be temporarily dependent on him in hopes of some one-on-one time. Going out to dinner, a movie, doing some coke or smoking some weed together, and maybe a hand job if there’s still some vigor and vitality left in him.

She’d found out about my connect, which was a high-up in the Mexican Mafia, so mine came straight off the brick, and how I’d sometimes do favors for some of the girls by bringing them some candy.

It wasn’t something I did on a regular, but I had some wealthy friends who liked to party and would come to me because of the convenience, not having to search, potentially getting ripped off, or having to wait all day and into the night, and on top of that, worry about the quality.

One day, Mercedes called me for something. It was for a customer of hers. It sounded okay, so I decided to make a call to my people, grab that, and then head to the club to meet her.

I arrived, called her, and there was no answer. I searched the entire floor, but couldn’t find her. I then decided to head to the back patio to see if she was outside.

The door is dark-tinted, and from inside the club, you can see out, but from the patio, especially in the sun, it’s impossible to see in.

She was there with her customer and some other guys and girls. A typical day at the club. I thought that maybe she wasn’t paying attention to her phone because she was entertaining.

I was getting a bit anxious because the last thing I wanted to be doing was hanging around with a knot of sizzle in my pocket. That’s not a comfortable feeling. So, I decided to call again instead of approaching to make the deal.

I waited with my phone to my ear. She picked up, checked the call, then hung up.

I realized then that she’d seen me calling the entire time.

I was enraged. I kept my cool, though. I didn’t want to come out of character and make a scene. The deal had bad news written all over it.

I stayed a while and got rid of what I had. It was at a slight discount, but I didn’t want to leave with it.

She’d come in and seen me. She had that look of shock followed by guilt, just before forming a bullshit excuse right after her bullshit apology.

Turns out, she’d called a couple of people she knew, and I hadn’t arrived sooner than the person she got from.

See, Mercedes likes to play the first-come, first-get-the-deal game. She doesn’t care about what it took for you to get there, how far out of the way you came, or the consequences. It’s all about her.

Well, that did it for me. I had absolutely nothing to say to her, and there was no way I was ever going to do anything for her again.


It was almost four years later when my friend Eileen, who used to work at Gold Town as a former dancer, was now the house mom at Big John’s Gentleman’s Club in Fort Worth.

She’d told me that Mercedes was working there as a waitress and had wanted to say hi to me.

Interestingly, after so many years had passed, I’d forgotten exactly why I’d stopped talking to Mercedes.

I’d gone one night to hang out, and Mercedes was at the club’s entrance, just past the vestibule, when I walked through the doors.

She greeted me with a warm smile. She still had her figure, maybe a couple extra pounds, but not many. Maybe three or four.

She sat me at one of the nicer tables near the main stage. We talked, catching up on the latest gossip and where everyone was.

Eventually, she got around to asking about my connect and if I still had the good because ever since the pandemic, everything was scarce. I told her that I did. Her face lit with excitement. She then asked if I had any on me because she had some whales looking for quality and were willing to pay anything.

I told her no and that if she’d let Eileen know that she needed something earlier, I could have grabbed it. It was then that it all came back to me.

I took the opportunity to dress her down properly. I explained to her how fucked up a move it was, calling multiple people at the same time, and the problems it creates.

She immediately apologized, explaining that she’d learned from her mistakes and that she was a different person now.

She’d said how she’d changed her life, that she wasn’t dancing anymore, and that she’d gone to school to study to be an esthetician, and that she was in the process of opening up her own spa.

What she was saying had the potential to be true, but I was very skeptical about all of it.

I toned down and listened, thinking of how I could do well for myself. With those whales of hers, there was potential to make some good money.

The next evening, she wanted to stop by my place to see me. It was on her way to Fort Worth, so it was convenient.

When she arrived, she’d come out of her purse with hundreds of dollars in single hundreds, twenties, and fifties.

She said that she had some big customers coming in and that she’d needed about eight hundred worth, and that it didn’t matter how much it was. It didn’t have to be exact. They didn’t give a fuck. As long as it was enough and it was clean.

I made a quick call, grabbed the eight hundred, hopped in my Vette, and drove off. I’d met my people and then came right back.

She was now putting the finishing touches on her makeup and was ready to go.

She’d packed all of her bags, grabbed her purse, and headed out for work.

That deal was a quick three hundred and seventy-five net in my pocket.

Within a few hours, she’d called me back needing more. I ran the same deal as before. She’d left, came to my place, handed me another eight hundred, and was back on her way to work.

I was now up seven-fifty for the night.

That went on for a few days to a week. I was doing well, and so was she.

It was then that she proposed that we could maybe get an apartment together and be together.

I hadn’t forgotten about the guy in prison that she’d told me about, and I didn’t know what had happened with that. I asked, and she told me that when he’d gotten out, he’d beaten her up pretty badly and ended up going right back. She said that because he was still on probation and because of his record, he would be gone forever, and that after what he’d done to her, she didn’t care.

It seemed I was right. I had a feeling that she’d gotten him into a cross.

I then asked about the old guy, and she told me that they were still friends and that he was always around.

I kept my thoughts to myself and didn’t give a direct answer. I suggested that she look for apartments and get back with me when she found something she liked. I even suggested that she should look into a spot close to where all the action was, but not too close.

It was the next day when she stopped by. She had a thousand this time.

Before me heading to my people, she got into my bed and undressed, inviting me. She was there with a hopeful grin, but I ignored it and went to go and cop. I intentionally took a longer route, making sure that when I arrived, it would be time for her to leave for work.

She was quiet and moved with a quickness.

She gave me a quick and direct look. Her blue eyes bore through me. She then left through the door without saying a word.

I had a feeling that it was over. My take was six hundred and seventy-five dollars, and was probably my last.


A few weeks had gone by when I got word from Eileen that Mercedes was now in a relationship with and was a strong advocate for an in-house dealer named Detroit, whose coke was trash.

Unlike most club dealers, Detroit was a street thug, a corner hustler, who lacked finesse and was the type that the whales avoided.

Being emboldened, he became a gorilla, aggressive with the girls, demanding that they all get from him and him only, and they weren’t having it.

They’d complained to management, stopped coming to work, electing to perform in Dallas instead. The stages were becoming empty, and the whales were unsatisfied.

Eileen asked me to bring in about six hundred worth as quickly as I could because the club management was in a panic and scrambling because one of the whales was demanding his money back and threatening to cancel his club membership.

She was waiting and met me at the entrance. She took what I had and shoved the thick wad of cash into the front of my denims, nesting it next to the left side of my nutsack. She followed that with a wet kiss to my cheek as she traipsed away towards the VIP.

After a few moments, she exited, giving me a thumbs-up.

It was about eight to ten minutes later when he made his way towards me. Tall, Ethiopian, nearly six feet five at about two hundred thirty-five, wearing a black suit, he was imposing, but the calm across his face was reassuring.

I recognized him right away. I was never introduced to him, but I knew that he was the District Manager of Big John’s and several other of the company’s clubs. He offered me a drink and a table. I declined, telling him that I was only passing by to say hi to Eileen while I was in the neighborhood and that I was on my way out.

He caught my drift, thanked me, and went on his way.

I was giving last looks as I dug out the bundle, replacing it into my left pocket. As I snugged it down deep, Mercedes appeared.

She muttered to me that there were some people who didn’t want me in the club. Obviously, it wasn’t from management, so I made her repeat what she said. She did, but this time with more confidence.

It was at that point that it dawned on me that Mercedes’s guy must have been watching the play from the start, and at some point, Mercedes had pointed me out to him. I was now a target, and I didn’t even know who had the advantage.

By only standing and not getting a table, he had to have figured that I was either about to leave or I was going to get a spot and hang out. From his perspective, that would be a problem for him. He’d have to think that I was going to move some sizzle, and after seeing me getting the VIP deal, it wouldn’t be long before he was out of business.

Either way, I knew that I had to make a move. I couldn’t just stand there and hover. Now the problem would be how to leave without a further confrontation. Well, I guess I hadn’t moved quickly enough.

From my periphery, I saw a black guy, about six one, who seemed to be about two hundred thirty-five pounds or so, take a lean on the railing about six feet to my left. As he stared, he was then followed by an average height, thin but wiry, dark brown-skinned, uniformed security guard who took a spot just behind him.

He barked my name as if to infer that he knew I saw him sitting there. I looked directly at him, asking if I knew him. He then told me that he was Detroit, David’s nephew.

David was a hustler from way back, whom I’d known when I first hit the scene. We had a so-so relationship, having done business in the past, but we were just okay with each other, not friends. David had told me how much trouble his nephew was, and how he was always causing problems by trying to boss the girls, thinking he was a pimp, and had been kicked out just about every in Dallas.

Detroit then stood upright in what I determined was a threatening manner. I immediately countered with a move towards him. He paused slightly as I approached, which was just enough time for the security guard to step between us.

He went off, creating a big scene.

The big Ethiopian was there in a flash. He’d grabbed Detroit from behind, tugging him away. It was difficult to hear exactly what he was saying, but he was no doubt threatening to harm me.

Along with some backup, they closed him into a side room. The Ethiopian came to me and apologized. He asked that I leave for the night and come back at a later date. As he escorted me out, I was demanding to have a man-to-man discussion with Detroit, and that I didn’t want to fight him, that I just wanted to clear everything up. By his snarky grin, I could tell that he was buying it. He thanked me for my service and handed me a stack of door passes.

The security guard followed me to my car. He told me that he could see something was about to go down, but he didn’t know why, because he saw that I hadn’t done anything or said anything to anyone besides the housemom. He wanted to know what was going on and what started the conflict. I didn’t want to say much at all because it’s not in me to settle a difference outside of the person that I have the difference with. I told him that I really didn’t know.

He then asked me if I was after Detroit’s girl or trying to get with his girl, or if it was the reason that I’d come to the club. I had no doubt that the security guard was somehow close to Detroit and was trying to get some intel. Not only did Detroit think he was potentially going to lose his setup, he also thought I was after his bitch.

In order to send a message back to Detroit, I explained that I’d met Mercedes several years back and that the ho had made me some good money, but she did some fuck shit, and I stopped fucking with her altogether.

I told him that I’d found out recently that she was working there at Big John’s and that she’d been wanting to talk to me. I saw it was another opportunity for me, and that we had a good thing going until she wanted to fuck, be into something, and get an apartment together.

When she didn’t get that, she created all this bullshit.

He listened intently, nodding as I ran it down. It seemed that it was making sense to him.

I entered my car, started it, and lowered the window. I then told him how Mercedes had once said that every dude she gets with ends up in prison.

That was my warning to Detroit. I didn’t think he would heed it because he was too enamored by that fat ass. But that was all his problem, not mine.


It was a few months later when Eileen came by my place with the news.

The laws had come into Big John’s and had arrested both Detroit and Mercedes.

They had been running a scam where Mercedes would copy the credit card numbers and I.D. Information of the club’s clients and Detroit had a connect that had the technology to take that information and withdraw funds from the customer’s bank accounts, and even get new credit cards and loans.

After searching Detroit, they found a Glock 19 on his person, and a couple of ounces of bagged up coke, some pills, heroin, and ice in a zip pouch that he carried with him.

As they were being taken away, Detroit was quiet. However, Mercedes was in tears and was already claiming that she was a victim and was being forced to do whatever Detroit had told her to do, and how Detroit had been trafficking girls, and had a weed-growing house with all the lights up in it. She even told how he had shot two people and had killed another.

She offered to turn over all the documents from the credit cards that he’d forced her to get for him, offering to give them the keys to their new apartment, and was telling them where everything was hidden.

The very next day, Mercedes was bailed out by her friend, the old guy, who’d hired one of Dallas’s best attorneys. With his money and influence, and Mercedes’s full confession, she walked away clean.

Creole Gaudet

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